Oooh, I like. I think my favorite sections were the ones of earth and air; your description of the angels for earth is gritty and I like the tie-in to humans, how angels felt repulsion for the material body because that was what they sought to escape from. As for air, I like the idea of mind over matter; people's thoughts make the angels cohesive and defined by belief until they become their own entities. Order out of chaos and omg omg *has a geek moment* complexity theory! lol. :) And though the angels made themselves ordered out of chaos, they thought they had to impose order on the chaos they perceived in humans... but the chaos has a certain order of its own. If that makes any sense at all. Natural chaotic order is much cooler than imposed ordered order.
Also: And they would have succeeded too if an angel called Castiel hadn’t had a thought of his own that grew from an idea and a question to a decision and an act. \O/!
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Date: 2010-08-08 08:30 pm (UTC)Also: And they would have succeeded too if an angel called Castiel hadn’t had a thought of his own that grew from an idea and a question to a decision and an act. \O/!